A Gentle Breeze Comments

...A gentle breeze blowing across this ancient land, In recognition of a beautiful couple in love, With forever clear blue skies above. I heard background music when I read this:

Leisure is your pleasure, Like music a song to your heart so pure, Your lovely daughter Caylin together are like a beautiful rapture, Love is like a gentle breeze connecting two hearts, ...... touching expression. I love these lines. It is a beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

'Love is like a gentle breeze connecting two hearts' - indeed! So lovely thoughts expressed in easily understandable words! I loved the last stanza, particularly: 'A gentle breeze blowing across this ancient land, In recognition of a beautiful couple in love, With forever clear blue skies above.'

Your opening lines set up your reader perfectly- -]A gentle breeze like a loving memory Blowing across County Meath's fertile and lush fields, [- - with those words I am walking in your beautiful and mysterious country and feeling the truths of life therein. Beautiful.

This poem reads in such a graceful and joyous rhythm! It accompanies perfectly with its theme, and the nature, the places, the feeling, the gentle breeze. A lovely poem!

Your grandparents watching over you smiling at your happiness their favourite part, ...these are grandchildren who come like a gentle breeze and give reason to live more for them.

A gentle breeze like a loving memory, great imagery, dear poetess, Hazel Durham, love it, thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++++++++++++++ 10

A gentle breeze Is a fresh love song that sings - tree lined road of Gracefiel (is it Gracefield? PH sometimes misbehaves)