Thursday, August 7, 2008

A Gay Virgin? Comments

Rating: 4.0

What am I thinking of?

The past? A long lost love?
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Gordon David
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Battle pass

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Keith Foley 03 September 2008

I liked the way this poem was layed out. But found it a bit abstract from itself, a bit scattered and maybe that was the point. Interesting title. Have to read it for just that reason alone.10 for originality.8 overall.

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West Tranny 29 August 2008

A one sided conversational tone to this verse, is that correct? Nice poem.

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