Saturday, October 6, 2007

A Gathering Of Tuxedo Felons Within Five Hundred Feet Of A Children's Playground Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonight I looked at the many people attending the party and I noticed
Most of them had fresh adult beverages in their left hand while their right
Was reaching out to shake a hand or to pick another person’s pocket
One or two of the men were smoking pipes and speaking in mathematical terms
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Audrey Stephenson 15 October 2007

ha... this is great. the title is fantastic as well. take care audrey

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This ought to be hung in front of the red carpet at every glittering political/paparazzi 'charity' fundraiser. Oh, yeh, shout it from the rooftops... one of those ironies that stares all but the partygoers in the face, as they go home smug and satiated. Fantastically penned Ted. t x

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Ronald Stroman 06 October 2007

eye been drinkin', but eye ain't drunk. a very insightful piece of work. my kind of poem.

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Ted this is one of your finest what a eye sight.. I salute you Sir...

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Scarlett Treat 06 October 2007

Shaking your hand or picking your pocket...escaping the poverty worse than dirty politics...Sounds just like all the charity events in my area...you been visiting down heah? ? ? As usual, wonderfully descriptive work. THIS is what I value in your work, Dear Teddy Bear, the accuracy, the insight....the knowledge of people. Keep it coming....

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