A Gathering Comments

Bursting with the beauty and brevity of life!

Well done poet.wonderfully created a beautiful poem.

This is wonderful. Well done

oh how time does pass. love this much

Nostalgic. And appropo imagery: the sand, the ephemeral drifting clouds bringing back glimpses of the past. And the fleeting element of time. Thanks.

Quite a magical writing! ...........

Yes it does run on doesn't it? We are always greedy for more life, and why shouldn't we be? Your poem reminded me of so many things.. ;)

How great it is to be taken back to precious memories. Time certainly does pass too quickly.

nostalgic and commemorating to childhood, it describes the simple pleasures of days bygone.

Time does pass quickly but only in retrospect as on the way through it goes slow, like a snail sometimes. These days it does me good to just sit quietly and let a minute pass and remember how long a minute really is as life rushes by. Time is a strange conception, man made to work out when to get up, when to travel, when to work......I'm putting it in room 101: o)))))) Ruth who hopes time won't notice her age ;)

We must all make good use of the time that we have. Every moment should be spent with something memorable. For time waits for no man. I invite you to read Time is Short. A good write.

a memorable poem on childhood memories, naturally felt, naturally presented! ! !

a very nostalgic romantic poem..with a distinctive style of narration with beautiful technique..love it

Time and tide waits for none...Well said..