Monday, July 14, 2008

A Gateway To My Heart Comments

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Look into my eyes,
Stop telling me these lies,
You play me like a game,
You would know, if you could feel my pain.
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Bree Swart
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Silence Dogood 25 September 2008

Its not bad I love the title but I find a good strategey to writting a good poem is to make sure the first line of the couple is larger then the second. Keep writing!

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