Saturday, July 29, 2017

A Garland From Smiles Comments

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The clemency of flowers on the air
awakens the numbed courtesy of
my loneliness's hands
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mohammad ahmadizadeh
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2017

Flowers spread fragrance as mercy to air to carry the same fragrance so far. This awakens numbed courtesy. Picking branches of flying relief is interesting. Love gives fragrance of smile like flowers give to air. Falling asleep in knee of love is interesting. A great imagery is drawn in this poem. Excellently penned this is and shared.10

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Thank you sir for kind comment encouraging me to keep writing.

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