Monday, April 27, 2009

A Garden On The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me say this standing while I still have breath to sing
There must be a light somewhere that brightens everything
I try like someone desperate to light a fire of the heart
I strike another match and watch you blow it all apart
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George Murdock
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Lynn Glover 13 February 2010

I really love the rhythem and flow of this poem and feel as though you have drawn me right into the middle of the poem just like a good poet should. I enjoyed my stay in your garden and I hope it continues to florish for you. Thanks for sharing and God bless, your friend Lynn

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take me with you. i want to plant the first seed. thank you for your kindness to me.

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Bob Blackwell 02 August 2009

A lovely and sad poem, your garden on the moon shows your warm heart still beats, full of caring and romance. Lovely write sir 10++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

HEART-FELT EXPRESSION OF LOVE. Great read.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 28 April 2009

This soft heart poet empathize, Oh! what an emotional poem? An emissary specially on everlasting love.

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Monesh Kumar 27 April 2009

Wow...your an inspiration....

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Subroto Chatterjee 27 April 2009

Pity, I won't be able to ramble in that moony garden...inhospitable atmosphere, etc. But what a song! ! Yer a real loverboy! ! I loved this one. Keep on, old boy. Cheers. Subroto

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