Wednesday, February 22, 2017

A Garden Of My Fair Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pains you give to me,
the misbehaves I face everyday,
the maltreatment I tolerate,
might have wet my eyes for sometime!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2018

There are so many beautiful lines imprinted in this poem that will warmly welcome this eternal life. It imparts a message that there is nothing to fear in death, that a new love line has been created the new love line...will be an immortal one...who.says I.shall die? .Incredible thoughts from a timeless piece.Into my Poem List.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2018

Amazing piece. The best poem I have ever read about death. This piece is an affirmation that there is life after death. That in such life, we will be in a perfect state where there will be no pains and sorrows.

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Rajnish Manga 23 February 2017

One of the best poems dedicated to welcoming the approaching death as if it was akin to a romantic affair with one's beloved. Thanks for sharing. I quote: the new love line will be an immortal line. Who says I shall die?

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 February 2017

This is really a beautiful poem. The wording and flow are extraordinary. when you give your left palm in my right palm, you will not find it difficult to imprint a new love line, and when I shall take the bouquet in my left palm, my both palms will be frozen, is very well thought and crafted.10+++

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