A Garden In Chicago Comments

In the mid-city, under an oiled sky, the dusky green perception was wonderfully witnessed. A gutter of poetry flowed outside the yard when the poet was deeply motivated. The garden still existed in memory. A Garden In Chicago has greatly inspired the poet. This is an amazing poem..

cool and beautifully penned it here hung the fatted souls of animals, Wile at my eyes bright dots of butterflies Turned off and on like distant neon signs.

Shapiro is a genius... (There is a typo in the fifth line of the second stanza - should be 'while' not 'wile' - I don't know how to fix it)

excelent marrying of nolstagia for the country cool and beauty of solitude in a chaotic city environment.