Tuesday, July 3, 2018

A Game Of Crap Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fruits hang heavily on branches
Harvest honed humanoid cloned
Humans away on translocation
Bats bicker for the brunch
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Doris Cornago
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Kostas Lagos 04 July 2018

Well, that's a poem! Commercialism and the hunting for victory and the first place only, devour any sense of honour or fair play.Anything for the win!

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Doris Cornago 04 July 2018

I'd rather have a man who honestly toils the soil than a man who kiss-butts for glory and acceptance. Sadly, this is our current hero cult.: C

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Doris 04 July 2018

Used your quote on my Facebook wall to accompany the poem. Attributed it properly. Thank you. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 July 2018

Such a powerful poem, ate Doris....10+++++

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Doris Cornago 04 July 2018

I truly hope it would be to rouse up some heroes among poets. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

Amazingly structured thought provoking poem on gambling is shared. This is very cleverly penned...10

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Doris Cornago 04 July 2018

Yes, my dear Kumarmani. We have lost our world to games, gambling and make-believe computer games. :)

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