A Game Between Two Comments

guess what you saw was battle inoculation for both.... the priveleged one to realize its not his cup of tea....he will be tender handed into a plush melodious life....unless...fate! to the urchin...as some are prone to say....it is a feeler for things to come and that sweat and perspiration will put his life on the anvil very nice obseravnt and tenderhearted with a realistaion of the inequity of life cheers an ten

hello ma'am you know i study lit in university...sometimes they give poems to analyze... i feel this poem can be a realy good one to study....it speaks a lot about the human nature....in fact you are talking about child's play...but if we analyze the modern day situation we feel like we all are engage in some rat race...which is very much a child's play...great write 10+++++ with lots of love shan

very observant, a common sight in urban play grounds. even children can exploit the weaker one. great flow. Mamta

the observation brought out like a story with a fantrastic flow

What a nice observation! Yes, that is how the society goes! Great!

good observation, the sheer joy with which the poor immerse themselves in play makes me wonder is it their way destressing.in some way the poem reminded of the novel Kite Runner.

good observation, the sheer joy with which the poor immerse themselves in play makes me wonder is it their way destressing.in some way the poem reminded of the novel Kite Runner.