A game- A fall
That night my spirit is burning
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Very nice poem! Picturesque with a subtlety of eroticism. With some feeling of guilt but very voluptous and sensous. Quite inhibited but when found to be pleasurable and ecstatic the body language becomes so intense until it culminates. Well penned 'Dong'.
deep thoughts expressed so heartfuly in touching way...excellent way of writing