Thursday, May 1, 2008

A Game- A Fall (/) Comments

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A game- A fall


That night my spirit is burning
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Jordan Legaspi
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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 26 September 2009

deep thoughts expressed so heartfuly in touching way...excellent way of writing

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 04 May 2008

Very nice poem! Picturesque with a subtlety of eroticism. With some feeling of guilt but very voluptous and sensous. Quite inhibited but when found to be pleasurable and ecstatic the body language becomes so intense until it culminates. Well penned 'Dong'.

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Jordan Legaspi

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