Monday, May 6, 2013

A Gamble With Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

A dim and misty morning, sunlight did not shine that day
A grim and gruesome warning, o' death within the gray
"O' dark things in the shadows, take me not; I pray
I have so much of life to live, I cannot die this day! "
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Tim Vallie
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Jane Vallie-amdahl 16 October 2013

It reminds me to live every moment, with intention.

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Ramesh Rai 13 October 2013

when death will b knocking doors of my life i will say, wait for a moment let me finish my poetry

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Bri Edwards 23 September 2013

great. i give it excellent. are you sure this isn't one of mine?

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Payal Parande 19 May 2013

i am in awe, i have read the Shakespeare's play and i fell in love with drama, and this piece indeed have the thrill and scare which attracts a reader...bravo sir really a great job

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Shahzia Batool 14 May 2013

A drama with dialogue and suspense, a short-story in simple narrative and a wonderful visual poem! ! !

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Yasmin Khan 10 May 2013

The poem paints a macabre atmosphere. Death is a gruesome reality that mortals can never escape.It's a dialogue between a mortal and the angel of death. The last couplet bears deep thoughts

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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