Wednesday, November 1, 2023

A Futile Bargain Comments

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I continued to bargain with death the virtues of life
but with no avail as death had its own strife.

Though my heart trembled with the thought of mortality
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sando Hussam 05 November 2023

A bargain worth not fighting.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 November 2023

To you I say avery excellent poem Thanks for Sharing and Bravo! ! ! !

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Nabakishore Dash 02 November 2023

Now all things--------------its own strife.True to the fullest extent. Moreover any bargain with death is perennially futile. Nice composition.

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Anjandev Roy 01 November 2023

......new journey to eternity began...... excellent......

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Poetic Sky 01 November 2023

Excellent poem, I liked the philosophy behind the poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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