Saturday, February 14, 2009

! ! ! ! ! A Furtive Kiss And A Hug! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.5

Here are your Roses, chocolate and wine,
I won’t be able to take you out to dine.
Please, please don’t start to whine
By the way, who was this St Valentine?
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Vidi Writes 03 April 2009

This is an universal affair Exceptions are adored. Love oh love... You drive us crazy But there are intelligent souls Who understand things better Who understand Love's matter And simply...'Moves On'... Dear poet... you are simply great in this smile of yours.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 February 2009

Your poetry is like a sweet kiss.

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Raj Nandy 19 February 2009

This is a lovely- smooth flowing, and rhythmic poem; it has humour too! I think Mamtaji, the hug & kiss should compensate, what more a male menopause can do? ! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 February 2009

We do celebrate so many festivals, occasions. Why not V.day. Especially in matured couples VDay is really great way to express each others love once again and imphasise.

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Rani Turton 16 February 2009

Amusing and very well expressed! Mamta, this is great!

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Lynda Robson 16 February 2009

You are a very observant woman Mamta, some men find it hard to be romantic I think, but at least he tried lol, good write, 10 Lynda xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 February 2009

Smiles some guys just can not say how the feel Mamta, but you know when your loved... great write that made me smile Mamta... Andy 10

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