From the East and to the West the sun must surely hope
adventuring as it shines on all within its scope.
The Northern and Southern poles made plain before its eye
hanging like a burning wick that flames above the sky;
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This was terror, I love the personification, on the opening 4 lines captures one's attention, I'm a fan of your writing skill C.C!
Liking an end rhyme (at least) , I would have been tempted to put in 'beneath the waves'.
A deeply poignant and moving poem. Another magnificent write.
Very heart moving and again so powerfully written! .. Definite 5 Stars! +++++