Monday, April 5, 2021

'A Furore Normannorum Libera Nos, Domine' Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the East and to the West the sun must surely hope
adventuring as it shines on all within its scope.
The Northern and Southern poles made plain before its eye
hanging like a burning wick that flames above the sky;
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Rebecca Navarre 13 April 2021

Very heart moving and again so powerfully written! .. Definite 5 Stars! +++++

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kyvin nash 06 April 2021

This was terror, I love the personification, on the opening 4 lines captures one's attention, I'm a fan of your writing skill C.C!

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Douglas Scotney 06 April 2021

Liking an end rhyme (at least) , I would have been tempted to put in 'beneath the waves'.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 April 2021

A deeply poignant and moving poem. Another magnificent write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 April 2021

An excellent poem! Wonderful expression... appreciated! !

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