Friday, August 28, 2009

# A Funny Situation Demanded..... Comments

Rating: 4.7

all the money
to the last penny
was found to be proxy
in that country
...
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
COMMENTS
Mubeen Sadhika 19 September 2009

Good imagination. Nice description. Deserves 1010101010101010101010

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Patrick A. Martin 18 September 2009

Nice ideas coming together.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2009

good write SLN...thanks...10

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 12 September 2009

different ending, nice poem... well composed

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 09 September 2009

A funny and well narrated poem.

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Raj Arumugam 07 September 2009

interesting indeed and well-narrated

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Lynn Glover 06 September 2009

A good funny poem with the civilian authorities and the crook teaming up. Very good write for a 10. Your friend Lynn

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Sathyanarayana M V S 04 September 2009

God may come in human form as the ultimate Kalki. But as He Himself said 'yada yada hi dharmasya glanirbhavathi Bharatha............' in Geeta, when the sins overtake and virtues downturn, he does something or other to correct the situation and bring in equilibrium......... Good poem

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Ravi A 03 September 2009

If all the essential commodities are made available in a free manner, money is not at all required. Every thief requires these essentials and when money has no value, who will loot for either money or the essentials? Money has no value and essentials are also available in the country. My view is that there will be no robbers either. What will the robbers rob afterall?

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 02 September 2009

A funny situation with a moral ending. Much to ponder about humanity. thanks for sharing.

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Siddharth Singh 02 September 2009

Some situation this. Quite funny and sarcastic.

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Eyan Desir 01 September 2009

Ha, good write 10sssssssssssssss

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Eyan Desir 01 September 2009

Ha, good write 10sssssssssssssss

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C. P. Sharma 01 September 2009

Amusing humour! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Antonio Liao 01 September 2009

an allegorical feature of what the world of politics as it dives....even in the smallest avenue of life....always get a suicide, a poor man carry his own bunny to a party though it's empty.....it great reading such idea of a great poet of our time.....thank you for sharing...God bless...a 10 +++++

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 August 2009

I found this peice very entertaining.. this is a kind of a satire isn't it? ? ? very nice to read.. Not many can write, thought provoking entertaining poems.. there is subtle humour in this poem too, very nice.. cheers shan

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2009

This poem has a great sense of humor.You amazed me Samanyan.

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Meggie Gultiano 31 August 2009

a nice message..I love your last line

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Tsira Goge 30 August 2009

Samanyan, Really amusing situation... If not a reality... 10... / Thank you......./ Tsira

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Ken E Hall 30 August 2009

The wrath of God knows no bounds as you explain++++++10 regards well put!

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