all the money
to the last penny
was found to be proxy
in that country
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A good funny poem with the civilian authorities and the crook teaming up. Very good write for a 10. Your friend Lynn
God may come in human form as the ultimate Kalki. But as He Himself said 'yada yada hi dharmasya glanirbhavathi Bharatha............' in Geeta, when the sins overtake and virtues downturn, he does something or other to correct the situation and bring in equilibrium......... Good poem
If all the essential commodities are made available in a free manner, money is not at all required. Every thief requires these essentials and when money has no value, who will loot for either money or the essentials? Money has no value and essentials are also available in the country. My view is that there will be no robbers either. What will the robbers rob afterall?
A funny situation with a moral ending. Much to ponder about humanity. thanks for sharing.
an allegorical feature of what the world of politics as it dives....even in the smallest avenue of life....always get a suicide, a poor man carry his own bunny to a party though it's empty.....it great reading such idea of a great poet of our time.....thank you for sharing...God bless...a 10 +++++
I found this peice very entertaining.. this is a kind of a satire isn't it? ? ? very nice to read.. Not many can write, thought provoking entertaining poems.. there is subtle humour in this poem too, very nice.. cheers shan
This poem has a great sense of humor.You amazed me Samanyan.
Samanyan, Really amusing situation... If not a reality... 10... / Thank you......./ Tsira
The wrath of God knows no bounds as you explain++++++10 regards well put!
Good imagination. Nice description. Deserves 1010101010101010101010