A Funnel Cloud Comments

The winds of strife may strike without warning!

Another brilliant work.....thank u...

The comparison of funnel clouds to that of fighter jets is absolutely brilliant! A thoughtful write...5 stars

A very powerful poem expressing the might of natural forces.....! Sometimes it can unleash a tornado or a cloud burst!

Reminds me of being a small child when I first saw my first tornado...10++

Clouds! ! Musing along! ! ! ! Ready for the storm. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The power of nature perfectly encapsulated in a powerful poem. Love the lines 'Like a fighter jet Ready for a blinding strike'. Superb! 10++ and added to my favs. Thank you Rose Marie for writing and sharing your stirring poem. Take care.

2) I also saw a funnel cloud once and it was scary! This poem is a beautiful and correct interpretation of what the poet has seen high in the clouds, psychologically, we always want to feel safe, so our enemies are ended like that, as the great poetess tells us. Thank you so much for this very interesting poem. Enormously fearing though.

1) oftentimes in the clouds we see figures, a figure or a collection of many clouds, so that we store something in our imagination, the longer we think about it in thought, we often " see" something to our imagination and " finish" that picture we have seen, such as a dark funnel cloud, ready as a fighter jet for a blinding attack to eliminate enemies!

To terminate enemies.......brilliant. anjandev roy.

A wonderfully written terrific tanka, dear ate Rose...10+++❤️❤️❤️

Nice poem on clouds.Like a fighter jet ready for a blinding strike.....10

Expecting rains in heat strokes, the funnel cloud with a promise the same, we all expect rains in such a hot summer. On the other hand lacking thoughts to write a poem, a poet expects some miraculous inspiration. A beautiful poem so nice penned by the poetess.