Monday, February 7, 2011

A Funeral Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can see all things now.
I can see so many tears.
I can see so much pain, In so many faces.
I can see it all so clearly now.
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Juan Olivarez
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Lynn Glover 14 February 2011

Beautifully written as all your work is, and I really enjoyed this one. Its a new perspective but truly great writing by a great poet. Lynn

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Smoky Hoss 09 February 2011

Very nice Juan, I like what you are saying here.

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Espen Øye Bjørkvold 07 February 2011

Thank you for nice reflections. This poem was very interesting to read, and made me feel the memories from my dead relations and friends flow by. Thank you again

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