A Full Moon Comments

U used to use a deep ingredient of love and missing in this poem, the emotion is knocking my door to meet....where moon is a story teller and bear your sincere feelings...love it... But friend, as u know we are sharing same moon everywhere(if u stay in earth..joking) , so wherever ur beloved wife/children/friends are...just look the moon and bath under it's light because u and they stare a same moon, now it's like moon become the intermediate to send your both feelings...better than telephone can do! Have a great day!

U used to use a deep ingredient of love and missing in this poem, the emotion is knocking my door to meet....where moon is a story teller and bear your sincere feelings...love it... But friend, as u know we are sharing same moon everywhere(if u stay in earth..joking) , so wherever ur beloved wife/childeren/friends are...just look the moon and bath under it's light because u and they stare a same moon, now it's like moon become the intermediate to send your both feelings...better than telephone can do! Have a great day!

great art work........... hope you are writing in sinhala also............ beautiful scenery in my mind with pain but a bit fascinating 'pain' Theruwan Saranayi Kolitha

There is much to be seen under the moon and stars. A bright poet for instance.Love Duncan

We all live by the same moon, and it is a connection. But an experience by yourself is still an experience only in the mind, unless you have someone to share it with when it is happening. Lovely, sad poem. Linda

You have managed to create a fantasy world, but not only for yourself, you incorporate the reader into it, it's so beautiful! I love artists who are able to do this, through words and the feelings that they hold within! Elya Thorn