Sunday, April 28, 2019

[ A Full Moon And I ] Comments

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A full moon and I

lie and listen all night long -
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Zyw Zywa
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Lidia Hristeva 13 October 2022

Tanka is difficult to master, but you succeeded, lovely poem

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S. Wesley Mcgranor 14 February 2021

Amen to that.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2020

listening the whole night to the melodies of the full moon. very fine poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 30 January 2020

A concise and beautiful composition. A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Zywa Zywa.

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Sankaran Ayya 23 October 2019

brief but beautiful lines Zywa Zywa

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Zywa Zywa 23 October 2019

Thank you Ayya for letting me know: -)

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Jane Campion 22 July 2019

Loved this poem.To my poem list pronto!

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Zywa Zywa 22 July 2019

It is nice that you re-read it. Poems are precious, and they keep rendering value to the reader, each time they are read.

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C F 20 May 2019

I like your short poem which express a universal sentiment of love, longing, loneliness across ages. Note this poem from the Japanese ca900 you said you will not forget me those are just words all that remains is the moon which shone that night and now has come again

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Zywa Zywa 28 April 2019

It's an impressive experience everyone should have

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 April 2019

it's beautiful expression // none is; just moon and I are the combined nation of the charming dark!

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Zywa Zywa 28 April 2019

It's an impressive experience everyone should have

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