A full moon and I
lie and listen all night long -
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listening the whole night to the melodies of the full moon. very fine poem. tony
A concise and beautiful composition. A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Zywa Zywa.
It is nice that you re-read it. Poems are precious, and they keep rendering value to the reader, each time they are read.
I like your short poem which express a universal sentiment of love, longing, loneliness across ages. Note this poem from the Japanese ca900 you said you will not forget me those are just words all that remains is the moon which shone that night and now has come again
it's beautiful expression // none is; just moon and I are the combined nation of the charming dark!
Tanka is difficult to master, but you succeeded, lovely poem