The parched ground
with wounds as wide as craters,
stared at the relentless, harsh blue.
Leafless, huge trees exposed their skeletons.
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A first few drops fell on the Earth's face / She licked her lips in disbelief /are wonderful lines and personification of the Earth! ! The whole poem is fantastic and the ending completely fabulous completing the full circle from the caption! ! A great write to enjoy! !
Beautiful depiction of a drought stricken, parched land drenched by the falling drops of torrential rain and Nature, thus completing her circle! Enjoyed much!
The hot dry summer and welcoming rain! Life smiles upon earth again and again. Always enjoy reading your poems.Thanks for sharing.
excellent imagery and beautiful personification...............lovely poem