Wednesday, July 11, 2012

A Full Circle Comments

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The parched ground
with wounds as wide as craters,
stared at the relentless, harsh blue.
Leafless, huge trees exposed their skeletons.
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Anita Sehgal
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Yash Shinde 31 March 2014

excellent imagery and beautiful personification...............lovely poem

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Heather Wilkins 08 June 2013

excellent imagery. A circle will always be completed.

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Wahab Abdul 14 May 2013

lovely thought and nicely crafted poems..love it

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 February 2013

A first few drops fell on the Earth's face / She licked her lips in disbelief /are wonderful lines and personification of the Earth! ! The whole poem is fantastic and the ending completely fabulous completing the full circle from the caption! ! A great write to enjoy! !

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Nithin Purple 02 January 2013

NICE IMMOTIONSSSSSSSSS

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Valsa George 14 November 2012

Beautiful depiction of a drought stricken, parched land drenched by the falling drops of torrential rain and Nature, thus completing her circle! Enjoyed much!

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 September 2012

Rich and allusive i liked it

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Gillena Cox 27 July 2012

the story told with such drama; a spellbinding poem

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Savita Tyagi 15 July 2012

The hot dry summer and welcoming rain! Life smiles upon earth again and again. Always enjoy reading your poems.Thanks for sharing.

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Anita Sehgal

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