Friday, May 5, 2023

A Fruitful Fusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was aspiring to be a professional dancer, which had long been my dream,
As rogue planets head out on their own, from the stars that reign supreme.

I was awash in unbounded enthusiasm, like yellow sunshine's fresh sheen,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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M. Asim Nehal 06 May 2023

As usual Full ******

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Thank you for the generous rating.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 May 2023

A great fantasy with apt metaphors, An exceptional imagination with fitting comparisons, rendered this verse captivating till the final line. This verse will motivate numerous readers to pursue their aspirations.

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Your words of appreciation are very nice. Thank you very much for your kind thoughts.

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