A Fruit-Laden Tree! Comments

Clever look at life just leaving our memories as the years condemn we soak the pain and cry inside...enjoyed the structure of the poem...regards

it is sad. and it is always. and forever and the picture you made. i hope the small plants will grow into the big trees... best wishes

Seeds and tender infant plants Grew under its cool and bounteous shades... Now tender plants will grow in pain Face to face with sunlight and rain... It's sad reality of life...My dad was A Fruit-Laden Tree 4 me...May the Almighty give me strength n courage 2 b the same tree 4 others...

The poem was getting ever so happy, then suddenly there is that dark angel Oh why? But the entire piece portrays life However good, or great we are, the end will come sometimes. Well done. Just brilliant Mohabeer Beeharry

lost time can never b found again... memories are painful... beautiful description in the memory of a Person who lived so long and made place in every heart!

a fruit laden tree is an elder in the family with much knowledge. a lovely tribute R I P

Really a praiseworthy write.10+ of course.

Yes, torn tree will never be rooted again...A Wonderful tribute, may his soul rest in peace. Thank you for sharing this beautiful write.

Great tribute to you dearest uncle. The eldest head is like a, as Ramesh Rai Ji has rightly said, like a banyan. tree. which provides shade, protection and allows smaller plants to grow under its wings. Great write. May God rest his soul in peace.

A wonderful tribute Shahzia, may he rest in peace

Thank you Wahab bhai for the comment, in the quoted lines, READ (pronounced-RED) as in past tense, it is in consistency with the verbs used in the past tense.

''It read of many a coup de tat Seeds and tender infant plants Grew under its cool and bounteous shades'' look again in these sentenses there is a gramar issue and you use the word ''shades '' twice which mars the quality of the poem of your standard, a poetess with great potenciality, thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

A great metaphor, and a beautiful tribute poem.

so sad knowing the terrible thing may he rest in piece a nice tribute with great moving words

Beautiful analogy Shahzia! Elders in the family are like strong rooted trees adn we enjoy under their shade. Without them its indeed tough same like tender plants who now have to face the harsh sun adn we the new gen has to face life and its challenges

Each of our elders define a tree. We grow comfortably in the shade nurtured by the fruits. When the tree is gone we get exposed to the heat of the sun. Nice poem to share all your feelings with others. May his soul rest in peace.

An empty space which is created by his death cannot be filled again-a sad news indeed!

A touching tribute to your dear uncle! We can never forget those people who served as beacons of light on our path! A poem so warm with emotions!

a good write about a fruit-laden tree.

this great tree give and not asking back and your Uncle- may Allah makes him lay in peace in his heaven as he passed away in holy month of Ramazan I see how you were so close and connected with each other and your piece has very deep sense of great lost But I am sure you will pass with the faith and bless of great family that you have I wish and pray for you and your family to be blessed with love God