Friday, March 4, 2011

A Frozen Moment Comments

Rating: 4.0

Ever since she kissed me
Time has fallen in an endless sleep
The universe is quite as I listen to her heartbeat
Now reality is at a standstill
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Bancroft Boreland
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Adeline Foster 23 December 2011

Ah, what an interesting thought embodied in this poem. Read mine - Marble Moment - Adeline

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