Sunday, February 17, 2008

A Frosty Morn Comments

Rating: 4.9

A frosty morn I walk alone
I blow my hands to keep them warm,
As sunlight shines but weakly through
The lightly dusted trees,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Tsira Goge 20 February 2009

will not look back but look ahead For spring awaits to bring me cheer, As nature sleeps my heart is lost For sorrow's all I've found. Now marks my lover's end. ..................................................................... Andrew, I like to read your verses.... Gracefully write... Though an ending very sad... 10x10... Sincerely, Tsira

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Bonnie Collins 23 November 2008

What beautifull imagery you have penned this beautifull piece of nature... As always, a 10... Bonnie

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Julian Salvacion 10 November 2008

nicely penned! ! ! ! well done!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 October 2008

wonderful expression by nature`s world, wrought ingenious with imagery, yet of unique genre,10+, thanks for sharing

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David Kowalczyk 19 August 2008

Extremely engaging poem. Can't wait to read more of your work.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 August 2008

sweet melodious lines... smooth stream like flow...well, Andrew! i read this poem a couple of times...nothing more to say...10/10

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Malini Kadir 27 February 2008

a beautiful write! you are a poet to admire........

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Ernestine Northover 22 February 2008

Another lovely write, words beautifully woven together. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 21 February 2008

Now..let me see..what do I like about this poem...OH YES, , EVERYTHING! ! ! ! The format, the content, the expression, the feeling, , , YES! that just about covers it (((((((((((((((A MASTER PIECE))))))))))))) Love duncan X

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Ann Beard 17 February 2008

A really lovely poem, the ending is very sad, but thats life.

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