Monday, April 16, 2012

A Frog Named Jo Comments

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It must be nice, being a frog on the side of the road.
At least you are more appealing than a toad.
You sit in the grass that matches your jade scales
It seems as though flies fly to you, compelled
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Heidi Fiore
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Saadat Tahir 14 May 2012

You left me speechless! …but hey: I won’t be daunted... :) Here goes. Apparently simple and everyday poetry rubbed on to contextualized deep psychology throws out shimmering lights like the aurora borealis….shimmering and iridescent like otherworldly fires. Like the silent tremors of a volcanic magma gathering force it has a Force Majeure that leaves little wrangling space for a critic. Purely from a content point of view the rhymes work well, it is fluid and exudes musicality…I could see little Mougly the man cub dancing in the back ground, Kaa’s soliloquy of serpentine syllables. Ya! .... I am sure Rudyard Kipling would have given a bemused nod or two…. :) And the real riot is when the poem is placed on the touchstone of context….then it glimmers unparalleled like the mountains in Mackenna’s Gold…..music to the soul. Grand, awe inspiring and mega scale… A beautiful write You can be rightly proud of yer lines Blessed be

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