Monday, February 10, 2014

A Frightening Dream Comments

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A huge python crawls in dream again
Massive shadowy figure of long grey serpent
Moves with tremendous force in cold obscurity
From mythological memory I recall of Vasuki*
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Akhtar Jawad 26 August 2014

Fears are in our sub-conscious, and sometimes in unconscious too, when our conscious is dormant, these fears are converted into nightmares.

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Kanav Justa 20 March 2014

An unsusual kind of poem... but a very beautiful one.. the fear wonderfully explained in your poem...

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Stan Petrovich 15 February 2014

The ancient Indians nailed down the age of the universe with astounding accuracy, according to Carl Sagan. How did they? I call myself a Buddhist but what do I know about Hinduism? Little. I will learn, I can see, from your works!

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 February 2014

Beautiful poem. It's really a frightening dream. Some dreams are really scary, leaves one wondered whether it was an illusion or truth... In fact I had many horror dreams especially the snake in childhood. Loved reading it. Beautiful way you have presented it.

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Valsa George 10 February 2014

Amid the fallen debris of rocks and iron His coils and fang will have mercy For a little room where the most delicate The most helpless of all A little innocent life lies Blissfully unaware of lurking danger. I am sure, it is the thought about the safety of your grand child......! ! A beautifully composed poem bringing out all the horror and fright of a daunting nightmare! !

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