Saturday, February 4, 2006

A Friends Ungracious Sea Comments

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My heart it breaks inside,
Because I am just me,
I will not change to others views,
Or give against the tide,
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Holly Heron
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Albert Wong 05 June 2007

It is not suggested to use the similar words (double words) into one poem, you are now repeating words to next lines. Here are too many same words into one poem. I don't like this kind of writing, I suggest try to use another word after one sentence. Don't use after one just used.

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