A Friend's Farewell Comments
I know what they are doing,
As they carry me to the car—
I have thought many times upon this moment;
As I know you have too.
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Interesting poem, but the obscurity gets in the way for the reader, yes, the obscurity, opaqueness does not help? As example, who holds you, the dog? Are you in the dog's arms? Interesting, the shifts in the poem; however, as I suggested in my last message to you
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7/28/2025 12:57:24 PM # 1.0.0
As I suggested in my last message—grow a thick skin.