Thursday, February 14, 2008

A Friend (The Valentine's Day Poem) Comments

Rating: 4.9

A friend to light a candle
When darkness overcomes.
A friend to hold you closer
When distant thunder drums.
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Sridevi Mahidhara 13 February 2021

Beautiful poem!

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Chinedu Dike 29 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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Marcella D 28 February 2010

so wonderful, your poem is very cute

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Colin J... 18 July 2009

Beautiful poem... Colin J...

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Toni Bellanger 06 June 2009

Very easy and pleasant to read. And such love you have for each other.

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

beautiful words written with such elegance and filled with great adulation and insightful warmth.

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Beth A 19 March 2009

I love this poem. It comes straight from the heart and i love the way it flows. i really enjoyed reading it.

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Ian Bull 18 March 2009

Thanks for the comment on mine i really enjoyed reading this one, looks like yours come from the heart just like mine do.

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The Poet 17 March 2009

Great poem, I can tell you truly care for your friend.

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Debora Johnson 10 March 2009

Very sweet, with most of the sentiments of friendship.............nice flow too..... :)

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 02 March 2009

I am a Valentine's poet too; this is indeed a beautiful poem. I love the rhymes, the rhythms and the imageries. A poem to remember!

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Corey Campbell (BlackChild) 24 February 2009

Very good. I like your style. This is a good poem for valentines.

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alex waters 18 February 2009

i found this poem most excellent. It has a wonderful flow, or 'rhythm and rhyme' as you call it and you set yourself up for a great finish, something that i find very inportant when writing poetry.

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On a card posted directly to me... and to a thousand others please. Yay from me. t x

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Bertrina Shorter 09 February 2009

If I had this given to me on valentines day in a card or presented in letter form my heart would melt. So soft and eloquent beautiful lay of words captured to amplify true passion

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Sade Blue 07 February 2009

Great! Valentine`s day poem

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Yassar Ali 05 February 2009

10/10 love the repitition of 'a friend' this poem is a must read

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Candace Quinton 05 February 2009

nice poem ii really lke it

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Indigo Christman 04 February 2009

Hmmm... sigh provoking.

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Eyan Desir 03 February 2009

sweet, sweet, sweet, nice poem........

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