A friend to light a candle
When darkness overcomes.
A friend to hold you closer
When distant thunder drums.
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.
Very easy and pleasant to read. And such love you have for each other.
beautiful words written with such elegance and filled with great adulation and insightful warmth.
I love this poem. It comes straight from the heart and i love the way it flows. i really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the comment on mine i really enjoyed reading this one, looks like yours come from the heart just like mine do.
Very sweet, with most of the sentiments of friendship.............nice flow too..... :)
I am a Valentine's poet too; this is indeed a beautiful poem. I love the rhymes, the rhythms and the imageries. A poem to remember!
Very good. I like your style. This is a good poem for valentines.
i found this poem most excellent. It has a wonderful flow, or 'rhythm and rhyme' as you call it and you set yourself up for a great finish, something that i find very inportant when writing poetry.
On a card posted directly to me... and to a thousand others please. Yay from me. t x
If I had this given to me on valentines day in a card or presented in letter form my heart would melt. So soft and eloquent beautiful lay of words captured to amplify true passion
10/10 love the repitition of 'a friend' this poem is a must read
Beautiful poem!