Monday, May 2, 2016

A Friend's Enforced Departure. Comments

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A friend's enforced departure.

I miss you in the morning,
with my first glimpse of the day.
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Dan Reynolds
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Elisabeth Wingle 20 May 2016

I love the way you lead your reader down the path to the wrong conclusion. I was following merrily along, when snap! The story takes an amusing turn and the reader is left a smile and the Ah Ha moment. good luck with the smoking its been 27 year for me!

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Dan Reynolds 24 May 2016

11 years last January for me Elizabeth. I find that poems and jokes share a similar format at times. The charming deception of the build up, then the all important punchline.

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