An untimely death of a dear friend
Never it is possible to forget
A life long friendship that expected
But death took away the life.
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A thought provoking elegy loaded with trucks of emotions! The sensible credo expressed in the last line stands as the undeniable truth, " We have to accept the reality in principle" ...well penned dear poet.....10/10
definitely death is the big philosophy subject we do not know its nature and secrets...it is lovely poem you have shared with us, Many thanks 10/10
Touching.Losing a friend is hurtful but anyone is strong enough to mend.
A reflective piece that portrays the helpless nature of man and the inevitable intrusion of the quietening force: death. This is sorrow in a grand style. Your words permit us to share in the pain. A well written one!
Still memories of the best moments Parted with the departed friend use of parted and departed word was something which hold me to read your poem like it 10 for it... and just check out my poem sun and planet u will like it
Death is such a part of life: We live, and then boom! We're gone. A fitting and thought-provoking tribute to your friend.
Always hard when you lose a good friend. Wonderful poem I really like the middle stanza.
beautiful poem and well expressed the bonds of friendship.
Death is part of us; and, i just buried my mother. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
All the sweet memories of a life long friendship makes us suffer when a friend dies and goes away. As you write it is the nature's way. But going beyond that, there is a God who accepts him after his death. So be consoled my dear friend. God bless you. thank you for this poem.
Yes, life is a prey of death, who can avoid it? An impressive poem...................10
A good heartfelt poem on a subject that is rarely spoken about. Yet you so lovingly spoke about a dear friend that you lost. Appreciate your kind thoughts.
A friend lost is a great loss indeed. Lovely poem... thank you.
This smooth and sobering trifecta of quatrains weaves a tightly knit poem energized by sadness and reality...A fine write, indeed ~FjR~
This smooth and sobering trifecta of quatrains weaves a tightly knit poem energized by sadness and reality...A fine write, indeed ~FjR~
This smooth and sobering trifecta of quatrains weaves a tightly knit poem energized by sadness and reality...A fine write, indeed ~FjR~
Very emotional composition, unfolding a lifelong trail of anguish upon losing a true friend. Very delicate treatment of the subject.
Death is a bad reaper often going after unripe fruits. A poignant rendition nicely crafted from the heart with conviction.....