Friday, June 27, 2014

A Friend's Advice. Comments

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I cannot understand the way you feel -
To me she seems so ordinary and plain,
The whole thing is a fantasy, unreal,
It would be better, surely, to refrain
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John Thorkild Ellison
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Colleen Courtney 27 June 2014

Haha! Wow! This is such an awesome poem! How many times have every one of these sentences needed to be said to someone! ! ! Sometimes it's best to be brutally honest. As they say, the truth hurts! Very nicely written piece!

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