I am not in my spirits these days
Someone has taken away my repose
But I shall not name him for he is my friend
Specially the friend of the summer nights
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Mohd. Akmal writes with great skill and deep insight. A friend is actually an enemy when you realize the havoc he has done behind you. He knows you too well and makes it worse. Akmal further goes to say that he will not mention the name of course because of the confidentiality of their friendship. Nice piece
who is a real friend or are all friends blood suckers feeding off one another? ? ? ?
Seasoned seasonal poem leaving the reader to guess if it is really a human friend or the weather or any insect...enjoyable one..10
Interesting lines about the night and the weather's effects...poem takes the reader along well into its meaning and mood, Akmal...
They must be leeches and the alarm is a foghorn and what you need is iron- lots of iron. Interesting play on words.
With friends like that you don't need enemies, great write by a great poet.
Interesting to read nature of friends today! Simple and at the same time says sorrow so well!
You did good that you expressed your anger in poems not before him. Your poem shows your anger vividly because of the behaviour such nonsense. But, i like you expression.
Modern approach in style and i like the idea of this poem. well done.10
satirical embedded in a humor lines. metaphores were carefully chosen for the best effect in delivering poet's thoughts. nice one my friend.
really creative, Good use of words and Nice work :) Keep up with your work, I look forward to reading the rest of your poems :) Rates 9: D Please keep reading my poems and rate :)