Tuesday, June 20, 2006

A Friend Named Dimbie Comments

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Dimbie? No! He is not gay!
He is just a real disaster
A natural one I’d say
Aussie says he’s wowser
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Kay Barcelon
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Furio Tp 23 June 2006

Un momento gioiso della propria vita, espresso in poesia, riesce a catturare con la sua sensibilità il Peter Pan che si nasconde dentro ogni uno di noi, e con queste poche ma belle parole dovremmo ricordarci sempre di non perdere quella parte di Peter Pan che teniamo nascosto.

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Abigail Keller 22 June 2006

Your work is fresh and new to me: Your style of writing is fun and caring. I really enjoyed this poem.

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Wind Ansea 21 June 2006

Kay: Very nice poem. To me, it reflects the words of one of those special people we chance upon in life, though all too rarely. A person who takes the time to understand and befriend another whom others have been too busy or uncaring to have been bothered with. Nicely done. Windansea

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Gartius Aurelius 21 June 2006

Not so sure about Dimbie.. but I have this image of a smoking and drinking goat running from the cops! Nice visuals there Kay!

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Dimbie Isalazybum 21 June 2006

that is a very powerful poem Kay... though I guess I'm not the most objective person to react! actually I do like geese more than goats. For the rest there is a lot of truth in this poem. So as Popeye says I am what I am. thank you very much Kay.

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