Thursday, June 16, 2016

A Friend Is In My Hallucination Comments

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A friend is in my hallucination

She is a soft spoken, a caring figure
Her brought up was in a loving family there!
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Chan Mongol
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Lyn Paul 26 June 2018

A beautiful write filled with dreams of someone special.

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

Lyn, thank you very much for your fine comment.

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Chandan Dey 26 June 2018

Dear Chan, your loving Hallucination has made you write a wonderful poem. Well crafted, well penned, Chan Chandan

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

Chandan, thank you for your time to read and review the poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 June 2018

Beautifully inscribed on friend and hallucination. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

My dear respectable friend Kumarmani, your enthusiastic comments always empower my spirit to go on. Thank you so much for your attention.

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Alam Sayed 26 June 2018

Your friend is a beautiful machine.

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

She is as she is. I wouldn't say her a machine. For sure, she is the dream lady. Thanks for the comment, Alam.

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 June 2018

superb love in Hallucination for a friend look I loved loved very much brought a rose with thorn, brought a deep breath together, brought a chirping of birds, brought a flute of Jame Galway brought a rhythmic heart together we brought everything A SOUL - on the wings of bee through the petals of rose and into the buds we become ONE and ONE LOVE great

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

Wow! You wrote well. I love the rhythm of your poem. Thanks. Mahtab.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 June 2018

Such a nice poem... I like it

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

Lungelo, you are so kind to leave a nice comment. I thank you for reading it.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 26 June 2018

GOOD! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! BRAVO! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

Mary, your two words got an atomic inspiration for me. Thank you dear poet.

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Britte Ninad 26 June 2018

excellent loving poem except last line- She lives in my hallucination with sips of beer! ! may be sipping of beer is beautiful and charismatic to this poet but I am not interested in that.... overall poem really is so goodly composed...love in touchstone method.... wow

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

Notable fellow poet Britte, your comments are so inspirational for me. But I don't talk that much to thank to kind people like you are. I understand that I am not your type. Hehehehe....Listen, thanks a lot for everything.

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Terry Craddock 16 June 2016

'Always a smile in her face, like a flower! ' a blessing and joy to behold, a radiant family blooms, before teenage testing years 10+ God Bless

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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018

Terry, I am glad that could cater a poem to please you. Thanks for the comment. Take care.

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