A friend is in my hallucination
She is a soft spoken, a caring figure
Her brought up was in a loving family there!
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Dear Chan, your loving Hallucination has made you write a wonderful poem. Well crafted, well penned, Chan Chandan
Beautifully inscribed on friend and hallucination. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
My dear respectable friend Kumarmani, your enthusiastic comments always empower my spirit to go on. Thank you so much for your attention.
She is as she is. I wouldn't say her a machine. For sure, she is the dream lady. Thanks for the comment, Alam.
superb love in Hallucination for a friend look I loved loved very much brought a rose with thorn, brought a deep breath together, brought a chirping of birds, brought a flute of Jame Galway brought a rhythmic heart together we brought everything A SOUL - on the wings of bee through the petals of rose and into the buds we become ONE and ONE LOVE great
Lungelo, you are so kind to leave a nice comment. I thank you for reading it.
Mary, your two words got an atomic inspiration for me. Thank you dear poet.
excellent loving poem except last line- She lives in my hallucination with sips of beer! ! may be sipping of beer is beautiful and charismatic to this poet but I am not interested in that.... overall poem really is so goodly composed...love in touchstone method.... wow
Notable fellow poet Britte, your comments are so inspirational for me. But I don't talk that much to thank to kind people like you are. I understand that I am not your type. Hehehehe....Listen, thanks a lot for everything.
'Always a smile in her face, like a flower! ' a blessing and joy to behold, a radiant family blooms, before teenage testing years 10+ God Bless
Terry, I am glad that could cater a poem to please you. Thanks for the comment. Take care.
A beautiful write filled with dreams of someone special.
Lyn, thank you very much for your fine comment.