Thursday, January 29, 2009

A Friend In Need Comments

Rating: 4.4

Trees outside in nighttime's pall
Casting shadows on the wall
Nasty, slimy crawling things
Slither through the dark's disease
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Elizabeth Sheaffer
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Jordan Jacobs 15 June 2009

The way you express all the nasty things happening then close it with the girl and her bear. It just hits home that everyone needs a friend. i love it.

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~ Jon London ~ 10 February 2009

I admire your expressionate way, raw and truthful,10 Best wishes Jon

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Elizabeth Sheaffer

Elizabeth Sheaffer

Mt. Airy, NC
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