Just stay around as a friend
Until I find the strength to stand on my own again
Never leave my side and let me alone
Now that I needed some shoulder to lean on
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boy does this look familiar. Look at 'Together, we can' When there is so much pain from a hurt that you are searching for a kind of peace.. A peace within. Together we can lift each other up and be like angels.. but angels with only one wing. We need each other to fly. That is what friendship is really all about. Lifting each other up
there is something very nice in the poem. the tone probably. keep on little star.
A great comment on friendship wrapped in lovely verse.
What we all want in life is what you depict here in this wonderful poem. We want to have a good, strong, solid friendship, one tht will last a lifetime. True friendships are difficult to find. Mostly we have associates. Excellent poem Little Star.
thanks for your motivation. your poems are wonderful. keep writing and remain a source of inspiration for poets like me.
Every word you'd say now comes as a cure Comfort me when I'm sad and unsure, Excellent write, nice flow, good wording, very heartfelt poem, full of emotions and pain, well done, keep up the good work, ~10~ your Tracy
Confirming the need of a friend with dignified declaration is definitely very interesting. Definitely friend will stay with you to give you strength. An excellent poem is nicely penned.10