Monday, April 20, 2009

A Friend Comments

Rating: 4.0

You wanna run away
but your trapped inside
Something so small a needle
couldnt hide
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Try and UnDeRStANd mE ....i promise im normal
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Indira Renganathan 04 August 2009

Your meditation on finding your friend while sinking feeling haunting you....welldone10

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Vp Ramesan 04 July 2009

A friend is fantastic in imagination. Are you crucified or resurrected?

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Jennifer Dorsey 21 June 2009

I like this one, I think we might have a lot in common.... or at least we write about the same types of issues! ! xoxoxo- Jen, Jennifer, or Just Me

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Winnie Angel 08 June 2009

simply true! .....have liked it.

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

'You stand up in church and raise up your hands But inside you feel your sinking in sand'... well said, Little Girl...your words portrait hypocrisy and reality on one single frame eloquently...10

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Fearless D 15 May 2009

nice

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oh wow, this is indeed a very lovely piece, and i should thank you for sharing this... yes, he is an awesome friend, and i cherish him more than i can explain. thanks again

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Eyan Desir 02 May 2009

good write Little girl top marks for you

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Emily Core 30 April 2009

we all need a friend but that man is no friend to me but good poem

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Jack Price 30 April 2009

DLG Good job and you give your reader hope in this rocky and ever changing world. Nice poem of inspiration and letting the reader know that they have Jesus.

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Mona Martinez 23 April 2009

lovely poem. i loved the point you have made. good job.

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Serenity Prayer 21 April 2009

wonderful job! thanks for writing it and putting it on here.

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Nangula Immanuel 21 April 2009

AMEN! ! Beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing

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