Friday, October 12, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

You are sent my way, a gift from far away
Where unknown forces, amaze me ceaseless.
Many reasons explain why you feel like home.
This exquisite being, closest to my heart,
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Deva De Silva
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Anthony Edmond John 28 January 2009

wow wow and wow this one just stole My breathe.. Nice job..cheers. The Sage Anthony Edmond John poemsofthesage@yahoo.com

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Dishani Jayaweera 28 January 2009

As always you made me happy.... tears in my eyes.... You said everything what i want to say to you....

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Alexander Steen Stewart 22 January 2009

i love the imagry in this poem, veryy well constructed. moreover i like the how you convey the emotion very clearly.10+ well done

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John Smith 21 January 2009

Beautiful, simply

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Fay Slimm 16 January 2009

Poetic heart in this verse - - and so honest with much well thought out usage of pure wordsmithing makes me gasp - - - - excelent piece....... thank you..... a 10 + + + for a tribute worthy of your very good freind........... from Fay..

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