Sunday, April 22, 2007

A Friend Comments

Rating: 4.9

Come to me in twilights surrender
When the twinkling of the stars await their call
And the moon is to begin its glorious shine
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Patricia Gale
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Obed Souza 24 July 2009

Friends build gardens in our hearts... Lovely poem! 10!

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Jun Insigne 26 July 2008

a friend is the first person who comes in when the whole world goes out, , , , , , thank you so much for this wonderful poem....10/10

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Colin Jeffery 20 July 2008

This is so moving... from the soul of a poet of merit, Brilliant

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Vikash Kumar 21 April 2008

What a beautiful story: use of so many symilies has made the poem more beautiful. You are a very creative poet. Keep up the Good work

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 March 2008

what a wonderful poem! ! ! ! love when blazes the glory of frienship as when in need by the time`s reeks soul when soothed by the passion the harvest of moon by the reason...............well penned by the ingenuity,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Chris Mendros 15 October 2007

i'm just about ready to stand and step forward.

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David Harris 22 July 2007

Patricia, what wonderful poem of friendship. Touches the heart, where poems should. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Lorena Walker 25 June 2007

Wow, this is beautiful!

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Melvina Germain 20 June 2007

Very serene, loving, caring a wonderful treasure indeed.--Melvina--

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Meggie Gultiano 01 June 2007

what a lovely poem for a friend.And i think you are best suited to this. I am blessed by you.

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Paul Butters 12 May 2007

Very comforting Patricia!

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Roy Storey 09 May 2007

Pat i have add this one to my poems, its a friend. thank you Roy.

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... Sheila 03 May 2007

Lovely and surreal and dreamy. Beautiful work!

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William Jackson 27 April 2007

I like the parallelism in the structure of the poem. I love the message. Lovely poem, Patricia. William

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Charles Garcia 27 April 2007

Patricia: excellent post Hope all is well reading your new posts Charles Garcia

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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 April 2007

A great notion and an honest request from a soft heart, thank you very much Patricia for sharing with us.

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Esther Leclerc 27 April 2007

'And time seems to stand still for new hope'... You know how to turn a phrase, P., beautifully, meaningfully. The poem is a picture of friendship true. Lovely. Esther : ]

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Michael Gale 24 April 2007

Once again a great TENner. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Geoff Warden 24 April 2007

Very nice flow to this one.........

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Original Unknown Girl 23 April 2007

This is such a lovely warming write, I imagine you are a great friend and confidante, this piece shows just a hint of your warm soul. Thank You. HG: -) xx

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