Come to me in twilights surrender
When the twinkling of the stars await their call
And the moon is to begin its glorious shine
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a friend is the first person who comes in when the whole world goes out, , , , , , thank you so much for this wonderful poem....10/10
This is so moving... from the soul of a poet of merit, Brilliant
What a beautiful story: use of so many symilies has made the poem more beautiful. You are a very creative poet. Keep up the Good work
what a wonderful poem! ! ! ! love when blazes the glory of frienship as when in need by the time`s reeks soul when soothed by the passion the harvest of moon by the reason...............well penned by the ingenuity,10/10, thanks for sharing
Patricia, what wonderful poem of friendship. Touches the heart, where poems should. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
Very serene, loving, caring a wonderful treasure indeed.--Melvina--
what a lovely poem for a friend.And i think you are best suited to this. I am blessed by you.
I like the parallelism in the structure of the poem. I love the message. Lovely poem, Patricia. William
Patricia: excellent post Hope all is well reading your new posts Charles Garcia
A great notion and an honest request from a soft heart, thank you very much Patricia for sharing with us.
'And time seems to stand still for new hope'... You know how to turn a phrase, P., beautifully, meaningfully. The poem is a picture of friendship true. Lovely. Esther : ]
This is such a lovely warming write, I imagine you are a great friend and confidante, this piece shows just a hint of your warm soul. Thank You. HG: -) xx
Friends build gardens in our hearts... Lovely poem! 10!