Sunday, August 3, 2014

A Friend Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just around the corner is a friend indeed
When called upon in need
Sincere, vibrant, resilient
A flower in the garden
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Savita Tyagi
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Allotey Abossey 06 June 2015

Ever so gently to rest upon memory: my favorite line. It's lovely, ever refreshing. God bless you

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Daniel Brick 16 November 2014

I like the way the ending dovetails with the beginning because it shows that there is an endless loop of friendships, recurring in our lives, the same emotions triggered by new events, the same gratitude and giving repeated over and over. It's precious to affirm this reality. And your description of time (of friendship and togetherness) as feather light shows its surprising resilience, even its strength although you might think it's the most fragile of earthly emotion. No, it persists.

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Ramesh Rai 15 August 2014

A FRIEND IN NEED IS A FRIEND INDEED

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2014

a nice tribute to a friend in need.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 August 2014

A listener, a teacher, a friend indeed Just around the corner Blessed are those who have friends, who make friends, and retain them for life. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 August 2014

A Beautiful poem on friend. Very true said, true friend share our happiness, pain, and support us when ever we are in need of them. I too loved the beautiful lines... It flew like a feather Yet falls back from ether Ever so gently to rest upon memory... A true friend is really a gift! ! ! Loved reading each line.

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Valsa George 03 August 2014

It flew like a feather Yet falls back from ether Ever so gently to rest upon memory Beautiful lines....... Yes, friends keep us going in life. When we are about to slip and fall, with extended hands, they are there to support us! A great poem on friends!

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