Tuesday, June 29, 2010

A Freudian Slip (Who Nose?) Comments

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I want to clear this matter up some way
And at the same time make my point

That love note I sent you the other day?
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David Whalen
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Paul Brookes 30 April 2018

Great poem made me smile oh you were in hot water indeed great write

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Bri Edwards 22 April 2018

this is about to go into my/our May 2018 showcase. thanks. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 03 April 2018

oh, i commented a mere five years ago the last time. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 03 April 2018

a series of laughs were caused by your ending. good show! ! to MyPoemList. and a showcase perhaps? ? bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 26 December 2012

nobody ever believes me when i say the wrong thing and try to set them straight. i hope you had better luck. the poem, though not huge, IS cute. thanks. bri guess i'll have to put it on my mypoemslist.

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David Whalen

David Whalen

Covington Kentucky
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