A Fresh World To Live Comments
watch the sky as a sheet of
blue canvas
and the dew drops hang on
to green grass
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time now for a new world to shine in the ray to give a chance to all of us to live another day /// let it be true ///
Beautiful. The message the mood the flow the rhyming. Some critical critics which excludes me would say some rhymes are forced who cares if we can start anew and live in peace. Great piece my brother.
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7/21/2025 7:00:50 AM # 1.0.0
A well penned poem....... Truly wonderful and splendid......5 stars*****