Monday, December 28, 2020

A Fresh Start. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The old man sat in his fireside chair,
His old dog lay at his feet.
Silence, pregnant with regret.
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Jak Black
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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

But think of the stink it would cause, esp. during a hot weather week, IF they were only discovered after a week or two! Maybe 'God'/She knows what she's doing after all. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

oops! (cont.) ...IF She existed/exists, cared, and had the power and compassion. IF.

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

Well She COULD make it happen, but....that's if

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

I concur with Smoky Hoss, below. five stars it gets from me. Why can't 'God' make two such companions die together, and peacefully? ? ?

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Smoky Hoss 30 March 2022

This is such a good poem. Incredibly good.

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