A Fresh New Dawn Comments

Just read it & also the comments of other poets. Therefore, it'll be unfair to repeat them. Wonderful: -)

U word itself mean prayer who else could have described it better

I pray for a miracle, by your hands, I pray for sight, through blinding sands, we who are human, so quickly despair, only in need, resort to prayer, but I converse with you, each day, The only way I know to pray, you are my friend, you are my guide, all doubts and sorrows are swept aside, when with my lips, I chant your name, your love for all, is just the same. guide me oh lord, when my steps go wrong walk by me as I step along, fill my heart, with a loving song be there for me, whenever I long. help me evolve, help me to flower, let me fulfill the purpose for which I was born, renew myself like a fresh new dawn. oh this is a wonderful poem. it flows from your heart and i felt that you are in prayer always. you are a prayerful poetess. keep onnnnnnnnnnn write and write just as you write in all your simplicity. i like this poem very much. accidently i went to your page and found a real prayer. i am happy. thank you dear Arti

A beautiful prayer, especially the last stanza is heart-touching.

In prayer we can bring all things to the Lord. Very well written and enjoyable. Well done

Beautifully written........sincere poem.....

Indeed a sincere prayer, simple and touching vocab