Thursday, August 23, 2007

A Fresh New Chance Comments

Rating: 4.1

The sky was oh, so beautiful that
I wish you could have watched with me
Brilliant and breathtaking colors
Exciting for the whole world to see
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Marilyn Lott
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Nikunj Sharma 25 November 2009

I shall run out the words of praise faster than you run out of imagination your poems about sky and days signify almost a reincarnation....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 September 2009

lovely poetic description! fine words chosen! loved it! 10+

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Meggie Gultiano 19 April 2009

you complete my day by reading this piece of yours, Marilyn.This is so beautiful and i love to read and re read it again.I am glad, i was able to take a look on your page..You make me happy today.God bless you, dear friend Hugs, meggie

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 22 September 2008

Lady, these two poems are couplets and both grRRRRRRRRRRRRReat! Loyd

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Ernestine Northover 23 August 2007

A pleasure to view and read Marilyn, a lovely description of the colours that cross the sky. Such beauty for free. Excellent write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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