A Fresh Journey Comments

Fantastic expression. Beautiful poem shared amazingly. Thanks for sharing.10

A sublime start with a nice poem, Elaine. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

Too bad you stopped posting. Lovely work.

This is beautiful poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Elaine, if interested, you might join our new editorial project: ''POETRY AGAINST INEQUALITY '' LET ME KNOW ************************* POEMS SUBMISSION: - DEADLINE: February 20,2016 - 1 POEM (in English) of maximum 25 lines; - SUBJECT: 'INEQUALITY' as it is described in the OXFAM Report 2016 (released on Jan.18)

I love this. I felt so inspired and hopeful while I read it. I have three sons and wish this attitude for them al; myself too. Watching them unfold and grow into men as they go through puberty, I think this is a very close approximation of many of their feelings and emotions. Wonderfully written. Thanks! Peace... Pam

This does my heart good to read, and discern... Best of luck to you, in the coming days. I wish you nothing but peace, love and happiness, as you journey forth...

Then call upon that breeze that once chilled your front door, Holding no troubled songs To announce the gleaming promise yet unfolding. the last sentence is so hopeful. A Poetess' vision should be always positive. we are poets who are called to change this world. thank you dear Poetess.

Beautiful write expressing spiritual emotions .

An awesome poem in skillfully penned muse and metaphor. The wording fits poetically in analogy. Thanx 4 yor coments.

A lovely offering and a deep thought. Thank you for sharing.

Worried trees of the past. Yes, on a new journey. Life is always with the memories of the past.

WELCOME, apparently, to PH. it took a bit of effort for ME to wade through this one. maybe the sentences could be shorter for ME. well, PH is NOT all about me, though i may like to think so. a poet's note might be nice, but i know of at least one member who felt a poem should stand on its own two feet. or was that stanzas? ? i would shorten it to: Son of the earth and sea and sand, Dwell not on the trials of yesterday! Today the wind brings a new light upon firm clay. Ascend the ragged cliffs Then call upon that breeze that once chilled your front door, To announce the gleaming promise yet unfolding. of course some readers, i'm sure, will love your version. great photo for poem. . thanks for sharing. bri :)