A Free World Comments

'None are so hopelessly enslaved as those who falsely believe they are free' (J. W. Von Goethe) . Snowden has shown that you were right.

The only way one can be free is to be honest about life. We weave to many strings We tell to many selfish lies just to stay on top.. I love this writing. Simple, far sighted and deep. Congrats Mohabeer Beeharry I have just posted a poem. A touch of light There could be something for you there. Thank you.

Again a fantastic write.. You have concluded in a wonderful way..Loved it.

freedom, freedom, freedom is what every living longs for, i like thinking of a free society where people get equal share like any one else. Good poem Dave.

there is nothing free indeed

we are always being watched. someday we will be free. nice write.

THE LAST THREE LINES MAKE THE POEM SUPERB ! Longing for peace and a free world is what all of us desire. Very nice poem! !

Precious stone cant shine like this poem, you did it brighter! _Soul

freedon is a thought. implemented in true color. result will be in favour of every one. need is to understand freedoom.

Great poem, and very true. Love it!

Once in a while we feel like this, particularly when we are sad! Nice poem!

Good poem Dave, Big brother isalways watching! No one is ever free. Thanks

as long as freedom is bought and sold, there can be no freedom!

Too right Dave, guess it will be onward going, invisible chains holding on to us, and a few very visible, such is life.

Well said Dave, it used to be a free country, but it seems that our freedom is being eroded away bit by bit, and slowly but surely.

I agree with you. Man is in chains everywhere. When shall we be free? Great write. Thanks for sharing